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hallot asunder collab #2
I think this one turned out better..
hallot's poem is amazing as usual..
eh.. my drawing is alright.. still not worth the time I spent on it!! I did have a greenish and redish color to it like hallot did in his version of the pic but this one looked better without it..
AND HE WILL NOT SUBMIT HIS DAMN HIM!!
anyway, PLEASE COMMENT!! BOTH THE PIC AND THE POEM!!

here's the full poem:
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Like mint you burn my eyes
The scent of pleasure
Plain, but treasured
You are like a foreign object
a playful blade
The hardcore music
We all play...

Open lies but closed obsessions
truth makes all the people sad
taken from your honest hope
a playful mom a playful dad...

Like mint you make me Vomit
Premium malt beverage
Black pepper makes me dizzy
and promotes violance
induces rage

Open but closed doors
unique but closed minds
I am saddened, my you work
I am saddened for no reason.

Like mint you make soft voices
Voices in my head
make me do what needs be
make me right and wrong
depends on what you meant
but never lend a hand

open up the store of blackness
sell your soul to rock and roll
pay for your bannishment
pay, go to hell

Like mint you make me vomit...
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Daily Deviation

Given 2002-04-03

Minty- hallot asunder collab 2 by asunder is a great mixture of beauty, skill, and poetic talent. I love the way they compliment each other. Such a wonderful collaboration! (Selected by $matteo) (Featured by °matteo)

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:iconforgotten:
Oh man this is cool. Im adding to faves. GOOD JOB!
:iconhallot:
NOOOO YOU FOOOOL YOU DID TO GOOD! OH MY GOD.

wow this looks really cool now that you fixed it up... and you gave me too much damn credit. your PIC IS FUCKING BRILLIANT.
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fuck me so I can die.
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:iconsilvermind:
beautiful !! I love the film around the edges...really adds to the piece.
The drawing is amazing, as always.
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[ - sarah
http://www.violet-ray.net

:icono-doyle:
that is so fucken mad... oh my god..... EVERYBODY ADD TO FAVS!!!!! =D (Big Grin)
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*spank*
:iconacryl:
freakin.sweet..nuff said
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.//acryl
:iconrious:
really good ! impressive !
:iconrobc:
I dont like poetry - specially not Deviantart poetry but...
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RobC

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:iconxdamien3gx:
O MY FUCKIN GOD!!!! There iz n0 word I kan find 2 describe this Masterp!ece...uhhhhh...0K, I'll just pu++ i+ dis way - I+ makez perfect l00k like $H!+....AWZUM JOB
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Remeber Kids Pink Rabbit Sez Shoot 2 Ill
:icondevi-ann:
this is definatly worth every minute you spent on it. it's amazing, and my newedt favorite.

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