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Minty- hallot asunder collab 2 by asunder Minty- hallot asunder collab 2 by asunder
hallot asunder collab #2
I think this one turned out better..
hallot's poem is amazing as usual..
eh.. my drawing is alright.. still not worth the time I spent on it!! I did have a greenish and redish color to it like hallot did in his version of the pic but this one looked better without it..
AND HE WILL NOT SUBMIT HIS DAMN HIM!!
anyway, PLEASE COMMENT!! BOTH THE PIC AND THE POEM!!

here's the full poem:
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Like mint you burn my eyes
The scent of pleasure
Plain, but treasured
You are like a foreign object
a playful blade
The hardcore music
We all play...

Open lies but closed obsessions
truth makes all the people sad
taken from your honest hope
a playful mom a playful dad...

Like mint you make me Vomit
Premium malt beverage
Black pepper makes me dizzy
and promotes violance
induces rage

Open but closed doors
unique but closed minds
I am saddened, my you work
I am saddened for no reason.

Like mint you make soft voices
Voices in my head
make me do what needs be
make me right and wrong
depends on what you meant
but never lend a hand

open up the store of blackness
sell your soul to rock and roll
pay for your bannishment
pay, go to hell

Like mint you make me vomit...
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Given 2002-04-03
Minty- hallot asunder collab 2 by asunder is a great mixture of beauty, skill, and poetic talent. I love the way they compliment each other. Such a wonderful collaboration! (Selected by $matteo) ( Featured by matteo )
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DeadlyIlluminati Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010
Wow this is really deep to me, I like it.
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:iconkittenlovval:
kittenlovval Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
wowwww. I love this.
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:iconjxcore:
JxCore Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2007
you dont know how much i loved your poem. >w<
i love tha rt work too.
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:iconik3:
ik3 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2007  Student Writer
the drawing is simply great, and the poem makes me think of duality quite well :D
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:iconigotabadfeeling:
igotabadfeeling Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2007
this is truly amazing :)
many many many of my regards
and much amazement on my behalf
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DrkRtst Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2006
After four years...this piece still amazes me
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:icongallopingstar:
GallopingStar Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2006
I totally love this! Both the picture and the poem. So much detail... Love it...
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arakasi-ky0 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2006
I love what you've done with the texturing :D Did you do it all in photoshop? with brushsets?
Looks very grungy
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:iconasunder:
asunder Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2006  Professional General Artist
ballpoint pen drawing scanned into photoshop...altered the color slightly and added brushes
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:iconpopnicute:
popnicute Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2005  Professional General Artist
i like the border on this one.. :clap:
do u have the brushes as well on ur gallery?
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:iconlexikinz:
Lexikinz Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2004   Photographer
um....wow.....if i had half your skillz, i would be alot better off....
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:iconblablaskunk:
blablaskunk Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2004   Writer
very nice!! :)
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:iconflisk:
flisk Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2004
i love the textures in the picture, and the very busy feel... great job.
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:iconismdof:
ismdof Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2004
This is very well done! Cool framing idea too.
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:iconcard:
card Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2004
Beautiful.
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:iconwyn--:
Wyn-- Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2003
nice work
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GreyAurora Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2003
I really love both the poem and the picture - they are both amazingly. Excellent work.
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mastercallisto Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2003  Student Photographer
heyyy man good job
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:iconsurvivor:
survivor Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2003   Interface Designer
Oh man... this is fucking amazing... The composition, the drawing, the poem, they're all fantastic.
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:iconnubbz:
nubbz Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2003  Hobbyist Digital Artist
how the fuck u did this? its just totally awesome and outstanding...i loveeeeeeeeeeeee it!

+fav
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garfield101 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2003  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i dont know what to say except this is great
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:iconwickedshadow:
wickedshadow Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2003
wow! great job!

i love this!
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:iconwl2ider:
wl2ider Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2003
wow. both of you really compliment each other. together, your style is truly unique.
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daaave2k Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2003
Finally I get to speak to Asunder. I've only recently founfd this site........actually i only found it today. Ive been looking at Asunders work on DAprints. Asunder has to be my favourite artist on this site by far closely followed by Mythchan and Zzaga. If anyone who reads this has MSN feel free to chat to me because no one else is ever online.
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cep Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2003
I love pictures with poems in them. This was one of the first pics I saw when I joined DA...which was not so long ago. This is the first chance I've really had to comment on some of the stuff I've wanted to. This is incredible asunder. The poem's amazing, the drawing's amazing....I love it...The semi-border of the film is awesome aswell - it's something different, and I think it works really well against the white background. I love the look of this picture. I don't know what it is about it, but it appeals to me in a big way. Very very nice asunder
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digitalia413 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2003
u are a god at drawing AND poetry :drools: Worship damn.. in MAJOR awe here! im speechless.. *a good thing i promise* fucking shweet!
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buckwithluck Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2003
I don't know what's bette the poem or the picture it's self, or could it just be that this picturs is just so good i can't think right.


REMEMBER...
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terpsichorean Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2002
SHIT thats awesome.
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tlouey Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2002  Professional General Artist
*jaw drop* wow
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pooflinger1211 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2002
This is awesome...I'm in love.
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:iconsorezki:
sorezki Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2002
This is wonderful!!! And sure is going into my favorites! :-) (Smile)
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thief6 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2002
excellent poem, a thought and emotion you should never pass. greatly goes with the imagery.
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thief6 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2002
how come i didnt see this, stupid me! this is very beautiful, a great colab and superb outcome. i got to add this in my fave...damn excellent work and congratulations! :D (Big Grin)
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vertis Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2002
wow.... definately plus favs
this is goin straigt on my desktop
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paroxysm Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2002
grungy yet delicate. and the words! this is outstanding! +favs
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:iconmooki:
mooki Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2002
I love art that is all scratchy and isnt afraid of being messy as part of the design..This is loverly chaotic and just a delight to behold :) (Smile)
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raven777 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2002
You two did a magnificant job on a very
painful piece...The inner struggle we
all face wieghing cost and consequince...

How it all gets rolled into 1 very ugly
ball till it seems ya ain't spose to do shit
any more...

I can relate...I am a product of my choices
as we all are or will be...
Excellent Work..

RaVen
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happyturk Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2002
...holy shit.

That's all I have to say.

Well, also: your line work is astounding. ::cries::
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:iconantigrrl:
antigrrl Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2002
holy shit. i love it. that's all i need to say.
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:iconfirlondion:
firlondion Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2002
Amazing.....
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cswatch Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2002
I know what I see is a real piece of art, but, I couldn't like it? I wonder why...

I feel this is great, but, I... well, I...

I don't know, is it a little messy? :P (Lick)

Nevermind... Nevermore... Neverwinter... Neverever

Great after all... :( (Sad) :) (Smile) :( (Sad) :) (Smile) :D (Big Grin) >:( (Sad)
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:iconzenaphex:
zenaphex Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2002
Wicked and kick ass crazy!
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alekelazrael Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2002
.exelent
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:iconzwober:
zwober Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2002
mein got!
ich kan nicht ohne dich.
great work
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:icononyx-2002:
onyx-2002 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2002
Shit dude this is amazing, i love this, deffinate fav!!!
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suzi9mm Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2002   Photographer
what can i say when it's all been said ? just another +fav ...

ok i'll just say it; it's freakin amazing k ??!!
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uselessn0thing- Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2002
awesome job the poem is great too, this picture really brings it out ...keep up the great work +favs
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otter1 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2002
i really like the other one to be on my page cuz it's so wonderful... but i have to do it... this rocks sooooooo hard it's undefinable and i can't even find words to express myself... i am lost in the beauty presented here + fav
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khronic Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2002
'like mint you make me vomit'
this is soooo F***ing cool. wicked poem. i love your drawing.
jumbled, chaotic, love the figures. are there just two, or more i'm missing??
you knew it was going to be a favourite. :) (Smile) +fav
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morduk Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2002  Hobbyist Photographer
I Loved IT!
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